《Elfinbook-2》

寫出一段有關未來的句子：

寫出一個有關未來的段落.你相信未來會發生什麼事?你感到樂觀還是悲觀? 輸入到輸入方塊。 寫出60-100個字。

I am optimistic about the future. With the technology developing, we have our own cellphone, iPad and computer. We could get much information and knowledge on the Internet, not just in the classrooms or books. 

For example, I had been learning English conveniently on the Internet and the applications from cellphone for few months. Besides, we could connect with all of the world to know what things happened. 

Some people may criticize that the changing quickly technology will make pollution. But the engineers have been creating much equipment to decrease that pollution.

So, I believe that more amazing things and innovative facilities will be made in the future.

等待老師批改中...

老師回復哩！！有一些文法的錯誤

1.techology developing 中的develping應該改為development

2.for few months應該為for a few months

老師主要是修改文法上的錯誤，這對一篇文章來說是基本要素，以後要注意呀～～

1. Word Choice: Use the noun form of this word to address it as a specific concept or thing. Nouns are the only word that can fill the important roles of subject and object in any sentence. You have used the word ''developing'' and writing the sentence ''technology developing''. The correct word to use here is "development". E.g. "technology development". It means the process of developing or being developed.

2. Article: You missed the indefinite article [a] here ''for few months''. Count nouns need a definite/indefinite article when they are singular. You should use the indefinite article (a) for a singular countable noun or when you mention something for the first time. The  correct sentence is ''for a few months''.