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請寫一封電子郵件應徵電腦程式設計師的求才廣告。如果你對這份工作沒興趣,就針對你有興趣的工作來寫,或者自己編一個。

 

輸入到輸入方塊。 寫出60-100個字

 

 

 

To whom it may concern:
I am writing in response to your online ad for a nursing practitioner in the emergency department. I have have had nursing experience on the cardiovascular critical care units in Central Hospital for four years and nursing practitioner experience on in gastroenterological department for three years. Besides, I have both of nurse nursing and nursing practitioner certifications. I am hardworking, motivated and very interested in this position. I have attached my resume. 
I am available for an interview anytime in the next few weeks. You can reach me at 0961-271-006.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely.
Riley    

 

 

等待老師評語^_^

 


好吧!我承認進度落後了一天,有些壓力,這篇有點亂寫就送出去了@@“

1. 缺了定冠詞the emergency department

2. 時態應為have had 

3. Central Hospital 專有名詞字母要大寫

4. 介系詞為in ---- experience in

5. nurse 為adj. 介系詞of後面應接名詞nursing

6. 缺冠詞 an interview

7. Sincerely 字母應大寫

 

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