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Hi, Eric!
How are you? I had been working in the emergency room for over ten years. I had really tried to face such a highly pressure job every day. And I cannot work in a shift system forever and that has massive influence in my heath. For these reason, I want to change my job in five years. My dream is to be a dentist. Therefore, I’m preparing to apply the medicine collage. 
Honestly, I'm learning some material about the teeth and biology after work. And I also need to get a TOEFL certificate for living in foreign country. I know that isn’t easy, but I’ll try it with my best. My mom should be worried even if she really supported to me. But if I'm to be a dentist, I'll make more money, have a regular daily life and get a healthy body. 
I was terrible sad that I can't cannot be accepted. Do you think that possible?
How about your life recently? 
Best regards
Riley

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 謝謝老師指導

1. terrible 要改成sad比較好

2. 缺字“Ｉ”

3. cannot改成 con't ....這兩個字在使用上有差異嗎？是語順問題嗎？應該來查一下！！！