EF English 7-4 電視廣告-寫作 @ 《Elfinbook-2》

7-4 電視廣告

寫出一個段落表達你國家的電視節目的意見.節目中有太多性和暴力嗎?有教育性嗎?給予你的意見,支持和建議. 輸入到輸入方塊。請寫80-100個字

In Taiwan, watching television is a very convenient and we can be a couch potato totally. There are four channels can be watched for free, but we usually pay a little money once a month to watch more than 100 channels.
Therefore, Each type of the programs has roughly ten channels from different TV station, for example, there are at least ten entertainment and twelve news programs. Furthermore, every channel play continuously in 24hours. So, I can watch the news whenever in my free time and I will never miss any news.
But the weakness is too much time need to fill out to not really summarize those important news. And long time of advertisement take up most space.
However, I suggested that the government should make a set of guide to decrease the channel numbers and improve the quality of content.

這次寫得有點衝忙、隨便，事後發現有很多錯誤，甚至連大小寫都跳掉沒注意到要改。

其實知道自己錯不少

有一種感覺⋯
寫作老師們的標準不一定
不過，除了看看老師們對寫作內容的建議外
主要還是著重於「鼓勵動筆實際寫作」這件事

所以親自寫很重要

看別人的文章要挑錯不難

自己要寫一篇沒錯錯誤的文章真是難

PS.Eric說我模仿外國人腔調說英文很假掰⋯⋯哈哈哈！表示我快成功了！