《Elfinbook-2》

寫一封電子郵件給某人,告訴他們一些突發消息.收件人或消息不必是真的.

輸入到輸入方塊。 請寫80-100個字

Hey, Eric
I have something to tell you let you know. Did I ever mention that Grace who work in the emergency department was divorced Pam for two months? And then she was dating Simon.
You must be surprising to hear it but promise not to tell anyone. She found out that she is pregnant for roughly two months now. She didn't notice it herself. So, She don't know that who is the father and how to talk to her new boyfriend. 
However, I'll tell you the following progress. Remember! Don't tell anyone.
Michelle

老師評語：

Word Choice (WC) Remember to try use describing words that fit the theme of the writing piece. You said ‘I have something to let you know’ rather say ‘I have something to tell you’ 

Missing Words (MW) Remember to proof read your writing piece before submitting it to avoid small errors. You said 'She found out that she is pregnant for roughly two months' rather say 'She found out that she is pregnant for roughly two months now' remember sentence structure and to add the pronoun, verbs, adjectives and nouns to your sentence.